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// GETTING INNINE SECTIONS, ONE PAGE, ANY SEAT

How a Bank Reads a Candidate

A hire is a credit decision made about a person. This is the paper the panel is writing on you, section by section, and how to write it before they do.

BY MICHAEL SHANG · SIXTEEN YEARS IN COMMERCIAL BANKING · UPDATED

// THE SHORT ANSWER

A bank reads a candidate the way it reads a borrower. It wants to know what you are asking for, who you are, what your record shows, whether you will do the work in a bad week as well as a good one, what stands behind you, and what could go wrong. Those are the questions a credit paper answers about a business, in the same order. Your degree and your grades are the security: they get the application read, and nobody is hired on them alone. A candidate who has written that paper on themselves knows what each interview question is for.

BASIS  Practitioner judgment from sixteen years in commercial banking, set out in How Bankers Think (Highbank Press, 2026). Every borrower on this site is a composite constructed for teaching, not a client. The market is mid-market commercial lending as practised in New Zealand and Australia; where a convention differs elsewhere, the page says so.

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// 01 — ONE DECISION, MADE TWICE

A bank that lends puts its money behind a business on incomplete information, and lives with the result for years. A bank that hires puts a seat, a salary, its training and its name behind a person, on less information still. It is the same institution making the same kind of decision, and it brings the same habits to both.

The habit is older than any interview format. In 1912 the counsel to a congressional committee asked J. P. Morgan whether commercial credit was not based primarily on money or property. “No, sir,” Morgan said; “the first thing is character.” The modern regulator says the same thing from the other end: collateral “should be considered the institution's second way out.” Character first, then the capacity to repay, security last. Read that order as a hiring rule and nothing in it needs changing.

So the useful question before an interview is not what they will ask. It is what a lender would ask: what paper is this panel writing, and what will it say?

// 02 — WHAT IS ALREADY ON FILE

Before anyone meets you, the bank has done what it does with a small loan: scored it. The online tests and the CV screen are a scorecard — quick, consistent, and built to say no cheaply. They are not a judgment of you. They decide whether a person will make one. Every round is in the Exam Hall to practise on, because practice is what a scorecard rewards.

The interview is the part of the decision a scorecard cannot do. The panel has your CV the way an approver has three years of accounts: as the appendix. What they are there to form is the paper — the reading of those facts that says what they mean and whether to back them. Either you bring that reading, or it is written without you.

// 03 — THE NINE SECTIONS, TURNED ON YOU

A credit paper answers nine questions about a borrower, in an order approvers rely on. Each has a twin in the interview room, and each goes wrong in the room the way it goes wrong on the page.

FIG. 01THE NINE SECTIONS OF A CREDIT PAPER, TURNED ON A CANDIDATE
1 · RECOMMENDATION“Why should we hire you?”

What you are asking for — this seat, this bank, this intake — and why the answer should be yes, in one paragraph.

GOES WRONG The answer arrives after four minutes of history, when the panel has already formed its own.

2 · THE BORROWER“Tell me about yourself.”

Who you are and where you are now, in three sentences.

GOES WRONG A history nobody needed: the CV read back in order.

3 · PURPOSE“Why commercial banking?” “Why this bank?”

What this seat is for, and why this one rather than another.

GOES WRONG The purpose copied from the job advertisement; an answer that would fit any employer.

4 · TRACK RECORD“Walk me through your CV.” “Tell me about a time…”

What three years show: what you did, and what changed because you did it.

GOES WRONG Titles and duties listed, with no sentence saying what they mean.

5 · REPAYMENT CAPACITY“Tell me about a failure.” “How do you handle pressure?”

Whether you will do the work of the first year — and still do it in a bad week.

GOES WRONG One good story at one date, and no bad one.

6 · SECURITYThe CV screen

What stands behind you: degree, results, referees.

GOES WRONG Security offered as the reason to hire.

7 · RISKS AND MITIGANTS“What is your greatest weakness?”

The two or three real gaps, what reduces each, and what is left.

GOES WRONG Every weakness turned into a strength, each marked mitigated, none left over.

8 · CONDITIONS“What would you like to ask us?”

What you would need in the first ninety days, and what you commit to in return, each tied to a risk above.

GOES WRONG Standard promises attached to nothing.

9 · APPENDIXBefore the interview

The CV itself, in full, so that your answers can speak in sentences.

GOES WRONG The body and the appendix disagree.

In a credit paper section 4 is the financial performance; everything else keeps its name. The right-hand column is each section's usual failure on paper, as it sounds in a candidate.

Two things follow from the order. The recommendation comes first on the page and last in the preparation: you cannot write it until the other eight are done, and once it is written every other answer has somewhere to go. And the CV is section nine. It is the appendix, the place the facts are kept in full so that the body can speak in sentences. Reading it back to the panel is handing an approver the appendices and no paper.

// 04 — EVIDENCE BEFORE CLAIMS

A bank reads a borrower's cash before it believes its profit, because profit is partly an opinion and cash is not. A CV has the same two layers. The title, the society, the “led a team of five” are the profit line: true as stated, and partly an opinion. What converts is specific — what you were handed, what you decided, what changed and by how much, and who could confirm it.

A panel that hears a claim asks for the conversion, exactly as an analyst does. Do it yourself before you are asked. For each line you intend to rely on, write one sentence with a decision or a number in it. Three such lines are worth more than a full page of titles. It is what the interview page means when it says to prepare the behavioural questions as evidence, not as stories.

// 05 — THE DEGREE IS SECURITY

Security matters. It decides whether many loans can be written at all, and a degree, a grade average and a referee decide whether many applications are read. But no competent lender advances money because the security is good. Security is what the bank falls back on when the first way out has failed.

An application that leads with its security — the university's name, the grade, the scholarship — is making the case a borrower makes when the cash flow will not carry the loan. Lead with what repays: what you can already do, shown. Let the security sit where it sits in a paper, in section six, stated once and exactly as it is. A failed paper stated plainly costs less than one the panel finds for itself.

// 06 — THE WEAKNESS QUESTION IS THE RISK SECTION

A paper that lists fifteen risks has not decided which ones matter, and a paper with no residual risk anywhere has not finished thinking. Both failures have exact twins in the room. The candidate who offers a strength in disguise has written a risk section with nothing left over, and the panel reads it as an approver would: this writer either has not looked or will not say. The candidate who lists everything has not decided.

The form that works is the paper's. Name the two or three gaps that could actually cost the bank something if it hired you: no banking internship, a failed paper, a habit of going quiet in a group. Say what reduces each, with something that has already happened rather than an intention. Then say what is left.

The residual is the part a panel listens to most closely, because it is the risk they are choosing to take. Naming it yourself is the strongest evidence of the thing they are hiring for, which the book this site works from calls intellectual honesty — one of its Four Signals.

// 07 — WHEN THE ANSWER IS NO

Many declines in lending are declines of a request rather than of a borrower. Issue 01 on this site ends in exactly that — “No, as framed” — with a different conversation on offer. A rejection after an interview is usually the same kind of no: this seat, this intake, this evidence.

A borrower who is declined asks what would change the answer, and comes back with it. Ask the same question, in those words, wherever the bank offers feedback, and treat what you hear as a condition to meet rather than a verdict to absorb. The borrower's side of that conversation is in When the Bank Says No, and almost all of it transfers.

// 08 — WHERE THE COMPARISON STOPS

Three places, and they matter.

A lender's return is capped at its interest, so it reads a file almost wholly for what could go wrong. An employer keeps the upside. It will sometimes back promise that no lender would, so show the ceiling as well as the floor.

A lender can verify. It has audited accounts, a valuation, a register of security. A panel has an hour and your word, so it verifies the only way it can: with the follow-up question. The answer to the second question is the evidence for the first.

And a person is not a balance sheet. The oldest rule in lending puts character ahead of every number, and none of this is a way of reducing yourself to ratios. It is a way of knowing which question you are being asked.

// 09 — WHAT THIS IS NOT

Not technical preparation. If the seat has a technical round — a coding exercise, a modelling test, investment-banking technicals — that is a different genre, and nothing here helps with it.

Not a script. The one-page paper is for writing before the interview, not for reciting in it. A memorised answer is usually detectable within two sentences.

Not a guarantee, and not advice. Panels differ, markets differ, and this is written from commercial banking practice in New Zealand and Australia. The candidate on the filled-in page is a fictional composite.

// 10 — WRITE THE PAPER, THEN READ SOMEONE ELSE'S

The one-page version comes free when you subscribe, at the foot of this page: the nine sections, blank, and the same page filled in for a composite candidate. Write it before the first interview and revise it after each one.

Then do the other half of the preparation, which is the half the panel is hiring: read a business you have never seen, and reach a view. Issue 04 is a clean file where the disciplined answer is yes. Issue 01 looks the same on the surface and is not. The question that decides most interviews — “Walk me through this borrower” — is section 07 of the interview page.

// SOURCES

The recognised ground this page sits beside. Each was opened and checked when cited; none is a source for the framework itself.

  1. J. P. Morgan, testimony to the US House Money Trust Investigation, 19 December 1912 — Asked whether commercial credit is based primarily on money or property: "No, sir; the first thing is character." Quoted in section 01.
  2. European Banking Authority, Guidelines on loan origination and monitoring (EBA/GL/2020/06), section 5.2.6, paragraph 143 — "Collateral should be considered the institution's second way out" — the order section 05 applies to a degree and a grade average.

// QUESTIONS PEOPLE ASK

What do banks look for in a graduate candidate?
What a lender looks for in a borrower, in the same order: character first, then evidence that you can do the work, in a bad week as well as a good one, and only then what stands behind you. The book this site works from names what a panel listens for as the Four Signals: credit instinct, structural thinking, intellectual honesty and coachability.
How should I answer "What is your greatest weakness?" in a bank interview?
As a credit paper writes its risk section. Name a real gap that could cost the bank something, say what reduces it using something that has already happened, and then say what is left. A weakness with nothing left over reads as a risk section that has not been finished.
Do my degree and grades decide whether a bank hires me?
They decide whether the application is read, as security decides whether many loans can be written at all. They are not the reason to hire, as security is never the reason to lend. Lead with what you can already do, shown, and state the degree once, exactly as it is.
Does this work for seats outside lending?
The read of the person is the same in every seat, because every hire is the bank backing someone on incomplete information. What the seat itself reads differs — a borrower in credit, a position in markets, a failure mode in technology — and any technical round is a different genre that this page does not cover.

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